Thursday, November 17, 2011

Rough Draft

Samuel Rios
October 29, 2011
Ms. Jaeger

According to Mike Davis author of planet of slums, nearly 80% of Nigeria’s

 urban population or some 41.6 million people, live in a slum. A slum is a place where

 people go to save money when they don’t have money or have very little money. It is a

very crowed place to live in. Slums can be very bad for people. Slums have a negative

impact on humans because those who live in slums must drink dirty water, are also prone

to disease, and live near to or in a sewage. Although slums help people to save money

they also have to take a risk in drinking dirty water.

People who live in slums don’t drink clean water. They have to drink dirty water.

Even in the article says “by United Nation’s definition, their residents are missing at least

Some of the durable walls, a secure lease or title, adeauate living space, and access to

safe drinking water and toilets.” It means that if you live in a slum you will be lacking

some of that stuff. If you are lacking good water to drink then that’s not a good place for

you to be living in. If you have a family and you are living in a slum your kids are going

to be missing good water and that could kill them. If people drink the dirty water they

will die. If lots of people start to die then that could start to effect the place population.

The population will lower and could effect the country. People in slums just don’t have

to drink dirty water they also are easily prone to disease.

People who are living in a slum could easily be prone to diseases. In the article it

says “ they used to make do by into a near by outhouse that belongs to someone else. She

takes me down a muddy, slippery path to show it to me.” If people don’t have a good

place to go to the restrooms then they could get diseases. They will die because there is

no good doctors to help them. People in the slums need a good place to go to the

restroom so they wont get sick. That would save lots of people in the slums also have

to face living in a sewage or next to one.

People who live in a slum also have to face living near a sewage or next to one

everyday. They just don’t live next to sewage but also a river that carries chemicals. In

the article it says “ the foul river carries not just sewage, but also chemicals form farming

estates outside the slum.” If you live there it will smell really bad cause of the sewage and

you would also get sick because of the chemicals in the river. It is also dangerous living

next to sewage because it could flood your house when the river over flows. If that

happens it could mess up the families houses and effect everyone living in the slums.

This is why all of these examples show how a slum can have an negative impact on

humans.

Living in a slum could save you a little bit of money but it also has its down side

to it. Slums could be a good place to save money. But slums also have a negative impact

on humans because those who live in slums must drink dirty water, are prone to diseases,

and live near to or in a sewage. People should never live in the slums. They shouldn’t live

there because it is not health for them or for there family to that live in the slums. The

slums are a crowed place and a very dirty place to live. How do you think the little kids

growing up there feel like.

Monday, November 7, 2011

Final Draft

Samuel Rios
 November 6, 2011
Ms. Jaeger

            According to Mike Davis author of planet of slums, nearly 80% of Nigeria’s
urban population or some 41.6 million people, live in slums. A slum is a place where
people go to save money when they do not have money or have very little money. It is a
very crowed place to live in. Slums can be very bad for people. Slums have negative  
impact on humans because those who live in slums must drink dirty water, are also prone
to disease, and have to live near to or in a sewage. Although slums help people to save
money they also have to take risk in drinking dirty water.
            People who live in slums do not drink clean water. They have to drink dirty water.
Even in the article it says “By United Nation’s definition, their residents are missing at least some of the following durable walls, a secure lease or title adequate living space, and access to safe drinking water and toilets.” It means that if you live in a slum you will be lacking some of that stuff. If you are lacking good water to drink then that is not a good place for you to be living in. If you have a family and you are living in a slum your kids are going to be missing good water and that could kill them. If people drink the dirty water they will die. If lots of people start to die then that could start to effect the place population. The population will lower and that could effect the countries economy. People in slums just do not have to drink dirty water they also are easily prone to disease.
            People who are living in a slum could easily be prone to diseases. In the article it says “They used to make do by sneaking into a near by outhouse that belongs to someone else. She takes me down a muddy, slippery path to show it to me.” If people do not have a good place to go to the restrooms then they could get diseases. They will die because there is no good doctors to help them. People in the slums need a good place to go to the restroom so they will not get sick. That would save lots of people in the slums, they also have to face living in a sewage or next to one.
            People who live in a slum also have to face living near a sewage or next to one everyday. They just do not live next to sewage, but also a river that carries chemicals. In the article it says “The foul river carries not just sewage, but also chemicals form farming estates outside the slum.” If you live there it will smell really because of the sewage and you would also get sick because of the chemicals in the river. It is also dangerous living next to a sewage because it could flood your house when the river over flows. If that happens it could mess up the families houses and effect everyone that is living in the slum. This is why all of these examples show how a slum can have an negative impact on humans.
            Living in a slum could save you a little bit of money, but it also has it down side to it. Slums could be a good place to save money. But slums also have a negative impact on humans because those who live in the slums must drink dirty water, are prone to diseases, and live near to or in a sewage. People should never live in the slums. They should not live there because it is not health for them or for there family to live in the slums. The slums are very crowed place and a very dirty place to live. How do you think the little kids growing up there feel like.
                                                   Work Cited
Blythe, Nils. “Mumbai’s slum life poses world problems.” BBC News Online. 29 Sept
    2011. http://news.bbc.co.uk/
Eaves, Elisabeth. “Two billion slum Dwellers.” 6 Nov. 2006. 29 Sept. 2011.
Fink, Sheri. “Cities of the poor I: Life in the slum (Kenya).” Public Radio International:
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Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Introduction

According to Mike Davis author of planet of slums, nearly 80% of Nigeria's urban population, or some 41.6 million people, live in a slum. A slum is where people go to save money when they have very little money or no money. The slum is a very crowed place to live in. Slums can be very bad for people. Slums have a negative impact on humans because those who live in slums must drink dirty water, are prone to diseases, and live near to or in a sewage. Althought slums help people to save money but they also have a down side to live in a slum.

Thursday, October 20, 2011

Thesis Statement

Slums have a negative impact on the humans because those who live in slums must drink dirty water, are prone to diseases, and live near to on a sewage.

Research Paper Outline


Introduction:
  1. According to Mike Davis author of planet of slums, nearly 80% of Nigeria’s urban population, or some 41.5 million people live in the slums.
  2. A slum is were people go to save money when they have very little money it is very crowed place.
  3. Slums have a negative impact on the humans because those who live in slums must drink dirty water, are prone to diseases, and live near to on a sewage.
  4. Although slums help people to save money they have to take a risk in drinking dirty water.
Defendable point #1
  1. People living in the slums don’t drink clean water they have to drink dirty water.
  2. “By United Nation’s definition, their residents are missing at least some of the following durable walls, a secure lease or title, adequate living space, and access to safe drinking water and toilets.”
      II.   It means that people in the slums are lacking all of  those stuff.
  1. It is bad for people to be drinking dirty water it could kill many people who drink    
It.
  1. They also could be killed by diseases that they could get by living in the slums   
because there is no good doctors there.
Defendable Point #2
  1. People who live in the slums could be more prone to diseases.
  2. They used to make do by sneaking into a nearly outhouse that belongs to some else. She takes me down a muddy, slippery path to show it to me.
II.   If they have no good place to go to the restroom then they could get diseases         
       because they are not using a clean restroom.
  1.  If they get disease then many people could die in the slums and that will lower
       the population of the world.
  1.  People who live in the slums also live next to or in the sewage.
Defendable Point #3
A.      People who live in the slums live in or on the sewage.
B.      The foul river carries not just sewage but also chemicals from farming estates outside the slums.
      II.    This means that people don’t just live in the sewage but also in a place where
        chemicals pass through that could be deadly chemicals.    
C.      If you live in this place it could smell really bad and you could also die because 
        of the chemicals.
D.      This is why all theses examples have a negative impact on humans.
Conclusion
A.      Living in a slum could save you money but it also has it down side to it.
B.      Slums have a negative impact on humans because those who live in the must drink dirty water, are prone to disease, and live near to or on a sewage.
C.      That the slums is a bad place to live and you shouldn’t live there even though your trying to save money.
D.      The slums are a crowed place and a dirty place hoe do you think the little kids growing up in the slums feel. They have to go through all of that every day cause they live there.