Thursday, November 17, 2011

Rough Draft

Samuel Rios
October 29, 2011
Ms. Jaeger

According to Mike Davis author of planet of slums, nearly 80% of Nigeria’s

 urban population or some 41.6 million people, live in a slum. A slum is a place where

 people go to save money when they don’t have money or have very little money. It is a

very crowed place to live in. Slums can be very bad for people. Slums have a negative

impact on humans because those who live in slums must drink dirty water, are also prone

to disease, and live near to or in a sewage. Although slums help people to save money

they also have to take a risk in drinking dirty water.

People who live in slums don’t drink clean water. They have to drink dirty water.

Even in the article says “by United Nation’s definition, their residents are missing at least

Some of the durable walls, a secure lease or title, adeauate living space, and access to

safe drinking water and toilets.” It means that if you live in a slum you will be lacking

some of that stuff. If you are lacking good water to drink then that’s not a good place for

you to be living in. If you have a family and you are living in a slum your kids are going

to be missing good water and that could kill them. If people drink the dirty water they

will die. If lots of people start to die then that could start to effect the place population.

The population will lower and could effect the country. People in slums just don’t have

to drink dirty water they also are easily prone to disease.

People who are living in a slum could easily be prone to diseases. In the article it

says “ they used to make do by into a near by outhouse that belongs to someone else. She

takes me down a muddy, slippery path to show it to me.” If people don’t have a good

place to go to the restrooms then they could get diseases. They will die because there is

no good doctors to help them. People in the slums need a good place to go to the

restroom so they wont get sick. That would save lots of people in the slums also have

to face living in a sewage or next to one.

People who live in a slum also have to face living near a sewage or next to one

everyday. They just don’t live next to sewage but also a river that carries chemicals. In

the article it says “ the foul river carries not just sewage, but also chemicals form farming

estates outside the slum.” If you live there it will smell really bad cause of the sewage and

you would also get sick because of the chemicals in the river. It is also dangerous living

next to sewage because it could flood your house when the river over flows. If that

happens it could mess up the families houses and effect everyone living in the slums.

This is why all of these examples show how a slum can have an negative impact on

humans.

Living in a slum could save you a little bit of money but it also has its down side

to it. Slums could be a good place to save money. But slums also have a negative impact

on humans because those who live in slums must drink dirty water, are prone to diseases,

and live near to or in a sewage. People should never live in the slums. They shouldn’t live

there because it is not health for them or for there family to that live in the slums. The

slums are a crowed place and a very dirty place to live. How do you think the little kids

growing up there feel like.

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